2017届高考英语书面表达感谢信写作讲义（1）

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2017届高考英语书面表达感谢信写作学案

【写作指导】

感谢信是得到某人或某单位的协助、支持或关心后答谢别人的书信。

感谢信一般包括以下内容：

1. 开头简述写信目的，即感谢的具体原因和内容(如感谢对方的礼物、热情招待、协助、支持或推荐等)。

2. 正文部分可指出因为对方的协助自己

受到的益处，或表达对所受礼物的喜爱等。

3. 结尾可表达希望继续合作、保持联络的愿望或有机会报答对方的承诺，并再次表达诚挚的谢意。

常用表达：

I’m writing to express my thanks for ...

I’m writing to show my sincere / great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.

I’d like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ...

Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.

I must thank you again for your generous help.

I’m most grateful for your selfless donation.

My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description.

Please accept my gratitude, now and always.

实战演练写作专题————感谢信

假如你是某中学高三（1）班班长李华。你们的英语老师Nancy已完成教学任务，准备回美国。请你根据以下内容要点给Nancy写一封email，并代表全班同学对她表示感谢。

参加Nancy授课的日子非常轻松快乐，大家都被她精彩的教学和优美的声音所吸引；

Nancy总是组织很多课堂活动，让大家积极参与；她经常说的“never say you can not.”给大家留下了深刻的印象；她用”team spirit”来鼓励大家交流和分享；

希望她再来到中国。

注意：1.词数为100左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

句子提取及翻译：（能一句多译尽量思考如何多种表达）

时间飞逝，因为你要回国，所以我们不得不说再见。

2. 我很高兴能代表全班同学因为你精彩的教学而表示感谢。

3 我们真的很感激你给我们上的课，在你的课上，我们感到很快乐，放松。

4 我们深深地被你的有趣的教学和迷人的声音所吸引。

5 你为我们组织很多活动让大家积极参与。

6 我相信每个人在你的课堂上收获很多。

7 我们印象最深刻的是 never say you can not.

8 你要求我们有团队精神并鼓励我们互相交流并且分享我们的观点。

9 多亏你的协助，我们在英语学习上取得了很大的进步

10我们期待着你下次参观中国。

2017届高考英语书面表达感谢信写作参考答案

实战演练写作专题————感谢信

参加Nancy授课的日子非常轻松快乐，大家都被她精彩的教学和优美的声音所吸引；

Nancy总是组织很多课堂活动，让大家积极参与；她经常说的“never say you can not.”给大家留下了深刻的印象；她用”team spirit”来鼓励大家交流和分享；

一句多译：

时间飞逝. 因为你要回国，所以我们不得不说再见。

Time flies like an arrow. / How time flies!

/ As time goes on/ goes by /With time going on/ going by, We have to say goodbye because you are going back / return to your country soon.

我很高兴能代表全班同学因为你精彩的教学而表示感谢。

I am glad to express thanks / gratitude to you / I am glad to thank you for your excellent teaching on behalf of the whole class.

我们真的很感激你给我们上的课，在你的课上，我们感到很快乐，放松。

We really appreciate the classes you gave to us, in which we felt happy and relaxed.

我们深深的被你的有趣的教学和迷人的声音所吸引。

We are deeply attracted by your interesting teaching and charming voice.

你为我们组织很多活动让大家积极参与。

You organized many activities for us in order that we could take an active part in them.

我相信每个人在你的课堂上收获很多。

I believe that everyone has gained a lot in your lessons / benefited a lot from your lessons .

我们印象最深刻的是 never say you can not.

What impressed us most was “never say you can not”.

你总是要求我们有团队精神并鼓励我们互相交流并且分享我们的观点。

You always required us to have a spirit of teamwork and often encouraged us to communicate with each other and share our ideas.

多亏你的协助，我们在英语学习上取得了很大的进步

Thanks to your help, / With your help, we have made great progress in our English study.

我们期待着你再到中国。

We are looking forward to your second visit to china. / We are looking forward to your coming to China again.

范文欣赏

Dear Julie,

How time flies! By the time you are going back to Britain, I’d like to say thanks to you on behalf of the whole class for your teaching us so well. We always felt the days when you taught our oral class were pleasant and relaxing. In your lively class, you organized many interesting activities, in which every one of us took an active part. You often said “Never say you can’t”,which left us a deep impression. What’s more, you told us how effectively team spirit works and encouraged us to communicate and share each other’s opinions bravely.

Now it’s hard for us to say goodbye to you, though we have to. Wish you a good trip and we sincerely hope you will come back some day. By the way, I am attaching your picture with the whole class. Please do check it out.

Yours,

Li Hua

课堂练习

假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王老师的协助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下：1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。

3. 对老师表示祝福。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Mr. Wang,

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement.

Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

Yours,

Li Hua

课外作业假定你是李华，去年是一名交换生(exchange student)去美国学习，得到布朗一家的照顾，回国后写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇，要点如下：

1. 感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病。2. 感谢学习上的协助，口语进步很大。

3. 欢迎到中国做客。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,

How are things going with you recently? Thank you so much for giving me a chance to live in your family while I was an exchange student in America! That was such a hard time for me, but your kindness and warm heart did let me overcome my homesickness. Besides, you tutored me in my spoken English in daily life.

With your help, I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the English Speaking Competition of the city. My achievement is owed to your help. If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming.

All the best.Yours,Li Hua

感谢信假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“文化交流周”动，并住在Kelly家里。你给在英国期间理解的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：

1. 活动中的收获；2. 难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；3. 感谢她送你的英文词典。

提示词：文化交流周Cultural Exchange Week

三步作文法一、精美词句

1. 因某事感谢 2. 在我逗留期间

3. 参加 4. 玩得开心

5. 参观某地 6. 一些名胜

7. 更好地理解 8. 给我作为礼物

9. 珍惜 10. 充分利用

[答案]1. thank you for 2. during my stay 3. participate in 4. enjoy myself 5. pay a visit to6. some places of interest 7. have a better understanding 8. offer me as a gift 9. treasure 10. make use of

二、基本句式1. 我们参观了市博物馆和一些名胜。

We .

2. 这让我对英国的社会、文化和历史有更好的理解。

This made me the English society, culture and history.

3. 我充足幸运的住在你家。

　 to stay at your home.

4. 在这里我尤其感谢你送我一本字典当做礼物。

Here .

5. 这本字典对我学好英语非常有协助。

The dictionary .

6. 在你方便的时候，欢迎来中国！

！

[答案]1. paid a visit to the city museum and some places of interest 2. have a better understanding of3. I was lucky enough 4. I especially thank you for the dictionary you offer me as a gift5. is a great help for me to learn English well 6. Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you

三、句型升级升级1：用定语从句连接1、2句。

升级2：用定语从句连接4、5句。

[答案]升级1：We paid a visit to the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.

升级2： Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offer me as a gift, which is a great help for me to learn English well.

四、满分作文赏析[答案]Dear Kelly,

I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England. Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We paid a visit to the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends. What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offer me as a gift, which is a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.

Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you !

Li Hua

模板背诵：1. I’m writing to thank you for…

2. I’m writing to express my thanks to you for your great efforts to …

3. I’m writing to show my gratitude for your help with my…

4. I’m grateful to you for your encouragement…

5. Thanks to your help, I overcame the difficulty…

6. If it were not for your help, I would not have succeeded in…

7. You are so helpful and warm-hearted, and please accept my sincere thanks .

五、实战演练

假设你是李明，暑假期间在美国参加夏令营活动，现已回国。在美国两周期间，你住在Johnson夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行级旅游方面的协助。请给他们写一封大约120字的电子邮件。内容包括以下要点：已安全到家，对他们的协助表示感谢；谈谈在美国期间的感受；希望保持联系。Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson,

Yours,

Li Ming

[答案]

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson,

I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned home safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in America, I just can’t help thinking of both of you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience. I’ve learned so much , not only English but also culture. And I really enjoyed a great deal of the fun and laughter we shared with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember this trip as well as your kindness.

I’ll keep in touch and write to you later. Please take care!

Yours,

Li Ming

假定你是新华中学的学生李华，上周日不慎把书包遗失在操场上，里面有学生证、手机、钱包等物品，你校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写封感谢信。

注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

书面表达（One possible version）：

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.

Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.

It’s such a great kindness that I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us.

Yours,

Li Hua

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